A вдруг я буду лететь, да и пролечу всю землю насквозь и окажусь среди этих, ну которые на головах ходят...
еще я очередной коротенький рассказик начирикала и мне бета ридер вот такой фидбэк послал --
"Overall, this piece is sheer brilliance. Truly, a masterpiece. I loved it through and through, and I only have some very minor comments and suggestions, to straighten out some grammar and possibly strengthen a few points here and there."
"Overall, this piece is sheer brilliance. Truly, a masterpiece. I loved it through and through, and I only have some very minor comments and suggestions, to straighten out some grammar and possibly strengthen a few points here and there."